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Bill Klein's avatar

Lovely as always. Thank you. Minor things:

- "guiding to you as to which..." I assume this should be "guiding you..."

- "Breath from..." I assume this should be "Breathe from..."

- "Now, half-ass." Is this like, "do it now you half-ass!" Or is it more like, "now try doing something half-assedly"?

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Ari Nielsen's avatar

First two typos, corrected.

I like the ambiguity you have introduced in the third case!

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